Wednesday, February 1, 2012

Project #3 - Bible Story

- I chose the story because I recently heard it from my church. Then, it got me interested and I started writing the story about Jonah and the big fish. I decided to keep it short and simple but very detailed by only writing out the important parts so that my story doesn't repeat too many things in it.

-The most difficult part of making the story is to keep it short and simple. I had to re-read the bible so that I can figure out which are the parts of the story that are most important because if I wrote everything from the bible it will be too much and readers will get bored.

-I enjoyed typing and sharing ideas with my friends. I like typing very much and did this since I was little and I also like to share my ideas with my friends so that they can tell me the mistakes that I made and can help me fix them.

Tuesday, January 31, 2012

Project #2 - Newpaper Article



-Catchy Heading: interests the reader to read more.


-Large Image: helps reader to get a view of the event or object.


-5-line paragraphs: helps reader to read at a constant and steady speed.


-Detailed explanation: help reader to understand the story.


Thursday, January 26, 2012

Project #1 - Adventure Advertisement

1. The purpose of my ad is to attract customers to sign up for Razer Tours. I want to attract customers that are outgoing, nice to each other, and can be cooperative so that the tour can proceed well and end successfully.

2. The two best language features in my advertisement are my slogan and my image. My slogan, "Everyday is and adventure!" is pretty unique in its own way because it tells people that normal people can experience exciting activities everyday if they want to. The large image of people rafting together in a river is an example of the adventure they are going to experience if they join the tour and shows that anyone who wants to can have fun.