-The most difficult part of making the story is to keep it short and simple. I had to re-read the bible so that I can figure out which are the parts of the story that are most important because if I wrote everything from the bible it will be too much and readers will get bored.
-I enjoyed typing and sharing ideas with my friends. I like typing very much and did this since I was little and I also like to share my ideas with my friends so that they can tell me the mistakes that I made and can help me fix them.
Kieffer, I really enjoyed the way that you retold the story and the extra details you added. 15/15
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